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Invention: I'm not sure about this story. I kind of think I might incorporate something like this into my revision. I would like to introduce the Queen and explain her back story.
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Invention (cont.): I like that the knight is pretty goofy and an entertaining character! I think he is very silly and fun to read about. I like his inventions a lot.
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Invention (cont. again): This character is rather ridiculous! I like reading about what she is learning and the place she is in.
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Invention (end): I like that this story has the same whimsical feel that the original Alice in Wonderland does, but with a few extra stories and twists.
Queen Alice: The new queens are pretty annoying. They talk a lot of nonsense which is a key element to Alice in Wonderland.
Queen Alice
(cont.): I wonder what Alice will have to do for the examination of being a queen. I don't really like reading about the queens. They don't make much sense.
Queen Alice
(cont. again): Is she dreaming now? I am a little confused, but that seems to be a common thing for these stories.
Queen Alice (end): Always so strange. I think it's funny that the food talked to Alice and she wasn't allowed to eat it if she was introduced to it.
Shaking and Waking: I think it's funny how everything just changes and she wakes up holding her cat. I like that nothing too crazy happened.
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