Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Sunday, February 12, 2017

Feedback Focus



Reading out loud: I am not a huge fan of reading out loud. I prefer to read quietly to myself. I feel like I get distracted when reading aloud and tend to concentrate on the pronunciation of words instead of the content of the story.
Copy-and-Delete: I liked this technique. It is similar to what we have been practicing as we read the stories in this class. It helps me stay focused and make sure I am reading well enough to form ideas about the paragraph I am reading.
Use a timer: I don’t like reading by a timer. It kind of makes me feel rushed and like I might skip some important things in order to stick to a timeline. I prefer reading at my own pace.

The best technique for me is definitely the Copy-and-Delete technique. It allows me to read at my own pace, but helps me to make sure I am staying focused enough to have some comments about what I just read. I also like using a timer a little, but it kind of makes me feel pressured and takes away from my concentration on the story and puts an emphasis on just finishing the reading. I do not like reading out loud. I distract myself when I do this and it doesn’t help me.

 

Wednesday, February 8, 2017

Week 4 Storytelling: Prince Ababwa


I awoke with a jolt. I am the daughter of the Sultan. Today is the day I am marrying the son of my father’s vizir. I do not love him. In fact, I hardly know him other than the few times he had come to our house for the banquets my father hosts every month. I don’t want to get married, but I am not 20 years old, and my father said I had to have a suitor by this age. My father decided the vizir’s son would be my suitor. He was old and not gentlemanly. I would have wanted to marry a youthful, handsome man. I got up, and my servants helped me get ready for my wedding. Four hours later, I was married and everyone was celebrating, but I had never been more dissatisfied. Why should I have to get married? I don’t need a man, and I never will. Our wedding came to a close. I felt like a spectator of someone else’s life. This isn’t what I wanted. I was escorted to my room where my now husband would soon be meeting me. I sat on the edge of the bed. When I saw my husband walk into the room, I became overwhelmed with sorrow at the idea of how my life would be from now on. I started sobbing and threw my head in my hands; however, I no longer heard his footsteps nor could I feel his presence. I lifted my head from my hands. I was in a strange room with walls of gold and windows of the rarest jewels.

‘Was this a dream? I was just in my room. How did I get here? I got out of the bed and my feet touched the cold golden floors. It felt so real. Could this really be a dream?’ I was terrified. I jump back into the bed, closed my eyes, and covered my head with the covers. Surely I would wake up back in my room. I waited for what seemed like a lifetime before peeking my head out of the covers again. I was still in this strange place.

‘Well, it must be a dream,’ I whispered to myself. So I decided it should be fun to explore this place until I woke up. I walked out the door of my room and down the long dark hallway. I could see the light from the moon shining into the wondrous jeweled windows onto the golden floor. This place was beautiful. I wandered around the halls a bit more peeking into some rooms as I passed the doors, each more extravagant than the last. What a wonderful dream! Then I heard footsteps approaching toward me. I froze then gathered myself and ran to the nearest room away from the footsteps.

 “Hello?” I heard a low voice whisper “is someone there?” I looked out from where I was hiding in. There was a man, well, more like a boy standing there in mostly rags. He looked friendly.

“Hello,” I answered slowly creeping out into the hallway to get a better look at him. He was quite handsome despite his ragged clothing.

 “How do you do?” he asked.

“Quite fine,” I answered. “I’m not quite sure where I am or how I got here though.”

“You are in Prince Ababwa’s palace. Welcome,” he responded and bowed toward me.

‘He must be one of Ababwa’s servants!’ I realized. “Well, while I’m here, could you show me around?”

“It would be my pleasure!” He exclaimed.

He led me through the palace, and we talked, laughed, and learned about each other until it was almost dawn. “You should get some sleep, miss,” he stated. I realized how late it was and agreed. He led me back to the room I had first awoken in.
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I woke up back in my palace. My husband was asleep on the floor. What a wonderful dream! I couldn’t stop thinking about it all day. As soon as I got in bed that night I rolled over dreading the moment my husband would come to bed and was in the golden castle again. I jumped out of my bed. I ran down the hallway and found the servant boy again. We talked all night and when I woke up I was back in my room. This continued for the coming nights.

I walked into toward my father’s office to talk to him about what these dreams could mean when I overheard my husband yelling about how I had disappeared the last nights and he had woken up in a strange forest, cold and alone. Then he would wake up again on the floor in our room. It wasn’t just me. It must have been real then. My husband exclaimed he wanted nothing more to do with me and demanded to be separated from me immediately. My heart filled with excitement!

The vizir’s son left later that day and was never to return. My father summoned for me and told me what had happened. He stated he was going to find another suitor for me within the next week.
I woke up in the palace again that night and ran to the servant boy to tell him everything that had happened. He was saddened by the news then happily requested, “Come, stay with me. I will be the one to marry you!”

I smiled and my heart filled with joy, except my father would have to approve of him before allowing me to marry another. I told him he would have to come to my father’s palace and request my hand.
The next day a handsome prince showed up and my father informed me that I would soon be wed to him. I was filled with sorrow. My father led me to meet him and it was the servant boy. He was Prince Ababwa all this time! We married the next week and lived in the golden palace happily ever after.

Author's Note: I read the story of Aladdin from Arabian Nights stories by Andrew Lang. I decided I would add a twist to the Disney and original story I had just read. I didn't mention the genie, but her magically being transported there each night implied he had something to do with it. I liked ideas from the two stories I knew and thought I would create my own from them.

Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Reading Notes: Arabian Nights-Part B

I am continuing the Arabian Nights stories by Andrew Lang. I am excited to continue this story because the second part is the Aladdin series! I have enjoyed the last few stories in Part A so I am looking forward to Part B.

Aladdin 1: This story was similar to the Aladdin I know except slightly different. I could see how it was adapted a little to make it a Disney movie. I am interested so far.

Aladdin 2: This was a sweet story of how Aladdin experienced love at first sight, but then he uses the Genie to bring the Princess to him. Then it becomes weird. She is frightened and obviously doesn't share the feelings that he does.

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Aladdin 3: I like that he now woos the princess in order to help her love him. He obviously cares for her because he makes the palace and keeps trying to take her hand in marriage. He won't give up until he is successful which is quite romantic. I can tell that a conflict is about to arise because Aladdin is having success and everything seems to be going well for him. Usually stories don't let the protagonist have an easy time reaching success.

Aladdin 4: Aladdin got the lamp stolen due to his ignorance. His wife did not know the riches the lamp held. I like that Aladdin does end up finding his palace, and I am eager to see what happens next.

Aladdin 5: I like that they are in love so much. I really find this story interesting. It is similar to the Disney story, but not. I like knowing the modified version story and reading the original one.

Aladdin 6: Disney definitely has a more exciting story. I like the romance and story Disney has. I feel like this Aladdin is a little rushed and doesn't spend much time letting you invest in the characters so it is hard to feel anything for them. I like the romance that happens throughout the story along with the happy ending. Happy endings are my favorite.

Monday, February 6, 2017

Reading Notes: Arabian Nights-Part A

I chose to read Arabian Nights by Andrew Lang this week. I have always loved Disney so I was ecstatic when I saw the story of Aladdin!

Scheherazade: I like how the story is set up with a conflict that is quite terrible, and no one knows what to do except weep and fear for their lives. I like that the protagonist is a girl and that she plans to be the hero of the story or is willing to sacrifice herself for the greater good.

The Merchant and the Genius: I like how the stories are all connected. There is a girl telling a story about a guy who in that story is going to tell another story! It's quite confusing, but I like the concept of it! I enjoy the trust and honor the people in this story possess.

The Hind: These stories are nice and short, but still enjoyable. I like the fairy tales and magic in the stories I have read so far. It is very imaginative and shows a lot of creativity.

The Two Black Dogs: I liked how the story started out similar to the other one, but had even more magic and a little love thrown in. I really liked how the story had the good people who looked out for each other and a happy ending.

The Story of the Fisherman: I like that these stories are short and easy to follow, but usually have a moral or some unexpected outcome. I like that the person in the story is going to tell another story again!

The Greek King and the Physician Douban: I like how the physician is willing to help the King. Of course, there is an antagonist that wants to take the good doer down. I don't like that.

The Parrot and the Ogress: I think it's interesting how all the stories have stories that apply to the situation the characters are in. I also like how all the stories are a way of proving a point and giving nice examples for the characters' choices.

The Physician's Revenge: I like the story of the fisherman and the genie, but I didn't like the one of with the King and the Physician. It had a good moral, but I didn't like that they both died in the end.

The Sultan and the Fish: I like how the story transferred from the fisherman to the Sultan who was going to find the fish pond but ended up at a palace. I am excited to read another story about the marble man.

King of the Black Isles: I liked that this story had a happy ending. I also liked that the fisherman was rewarded like the genie had promised, and that the king had not forgotten him. I really enjoyed the stories inside other stories.

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